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注意：
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2．只允許修改10處， 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I am a 18-year-old Chinese girl． I've been learning English in a few years． To my joy， with the help of Linda， my pen pal in American， I'm getting more and more interesting in English． Linda， like many girls， are kind and lovely． Although her English isn't easy to understand it， we enjoy write to each other and we usually talk a lot about our school activities． By communicating， we also realize that Chinese culture or American culture are so differently． I am determined to work hard improve my English so that I can introduce some traditional Chinese festivals to her．
【考點(diǎn)】傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗與文化；學(xué)習(xí)．
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