文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
It was raining．In his way home from school Peter saw an old man walking with difficult in the rain without a umbrella．Peter went up to him and offered share the umbrella with him．The old man in poor health，so Peter tried to hold the umbrella．But he was so short to hold it high enough．While wondered what to do，he saw the old man's stick and had an idea．He had tied the stick to the handle of the umbrella and made them longer．Now we shared the umbrella．Peter was happy．